The first line decides whether a LinkedIn post gets read
In the LinkedIn feed, people see your name, headline and the first lines of the post. Everything after that sits behind "see more". The first line is the post's headline, and "Excited to share..." is the most skipped headline on the platform.
Open with the point instead: the result, the mistake, the surprising detail. When you edit a draft, check that its first line does that.
Short paragraphs with blank lines between them read better on a phone, where most of the feed is read. Keep that format when you edit.
Three angles for the same topic
Each run gives you a story, a tip and a question, so one topic can become three posts over a few weeks.
The story post works for lessons from your work: what happened, what you learned, what you would do differently. The tip post works when you can teach a specific how-to. The question post invites your network to share their view, and the comments become the content.
No draft invents numbers or results. If you have real figures, add them yourself; they make a post more credible than any adjective.